||[Jun. 20th, 2008|09:05 pm]
I'm Caro. I'm not sure if this is the right place to ask this, sorry if I'm out of line.
I don't usually write fanfic (just original fiction)... but suddenly I have 3000 words of OZ fic sitting on my hard drive. O'Reily and Keller spend an afternoon spinning tales... Ryan/Gloria, Beecher/Keller. Some explicit sexual content. The fic has problems but I feel like I've done everything I can without some outside input. Would anyone be willing to help out? Grammar/spelling are more or less okay (I hope!), I'm looking for someone, or a couple of people, with a good eye for pacing, structure, character, etc. I'm prepared for the possibility that it's just no good and should be scrapped, but I'm hoping it'll be okay after a bit of healthy criticism.